हम प्यार को छोड़ेंगे
हर जज़्बात को छोड़ेंगे
जी लेंगे तन्हाई
तुझे सहारा बना के
जो तुने भी मुह फेरा तो
इस संसार को छोड़ेंगे

hum pyaar ko chodenge
har jazbaat ko chodenge
jee lenge tanhayee
tujhe sahara bana ke
jo tune bhi muh fera to
is sansaar ko chodenge


Please give comment on what you get from poem(story or emotion).

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8 comments:

    संजय भास्‍कर said...

    na hum aapke pyar ko chodenge
    na hi sansar ko chodenge
    wah kya likha hai dost...

  1. ... on April 4, 2010 at 10:23 PM  
  2. Unknown said...

    kya baat too gud..

  3. ... on April 5, 2010 at 4:36 AM  
  4. Randhir Singh Suman said...

    nice

  5. ... on April 5, 2010 at 5:04 AM  
  6. kshama said...

    Samvedansheel panktiyan...anek shubhkamnayen!

  7. ... on April 6, 2010 at 3:38 AM  
  8. Anonymous said...

    kya baat hai...
    maza aa gaya....
    umeed hai aage bhi isi tarah likhte rahenge.....
    http://i555.blogspot.com/

  9. ... on April 9, 2010 at 11:50 PM  
  10. बाल भवन जबलपुर said...

    अति सुन्दर पोस्ट

  11. ... on May 21, 2010 at 6:30 AM  
  12. बाल भवन जबलपुर said...

    टिप्पणी में देर हुई माफ़ी चाहता हूं

  13. ... on May 21, 2010 at 6:31 AM  
  14. Anand said...

    sharminda na kare...aap ka aane se hi mai kritagya ho gaya..

  15. ... on May 21, 2010 at 10:24 AM